tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7371035494325059889.post8727997135954755598..comments2023-06-16T09:10:46.898-04:00Comments on Write Brane: PARSEC Science Fiction and Fantasy Short Story ContestWilliam R.D. Woodhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17029764743168395507noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7371035494325059889.post-25848708495882676332010-08-14T20:40:30.453-04:002010-08-14T20:40:30.453-04:00Thanks, Emmalyn! I'm just honored my story was...Thanks, Emmalyn! I'm just honored my story was chosen. <br /><br />I'll check out your link and send any comments along to you. :-)William R.D. Woodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17029764743168395507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7371035494325059889.post-26930681753413527452010-08-11T15:02:25.967-04:002010-08-11T15:02:25.967-04:00Well earned! Something about the kid-speak grated...Well earned! Something about the kid-speak grated on my nerves (maybe just because I'm never around kids and consider them alien creatures at times) but the story is first rate, thought provoking, and nerve wrackingly great!<br /><br />My own entry was last-minute fluff since I had a really hard time with the theme. I also usually do novel length pieces, so I'd appreciate any tips you might have on how to make it a better short story. I'm at a loss to know how to fix it, or if it's one of those where you just have to start over with a better premise...<br /><br />http://enexplorations.blogspot.com/2010/07/doorway-to-dreams.htmlEmmalynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10222171264373627497noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7371035494325059889.post-63894748718568845912010-07-08T10:21:14.007-04:002010-07-08T10:21:14.007-04:00It was that comma that I recommended that pushed y...It was that comma that I recommended that pushed you over the finish line right? ;)<br /><br />Congrats! "Color in a Box" is an intriguing multi-dimensional piece that was a lot of fun!!! I'm sure you'll be hearing from a lot of folks about this one.Jeffhttp://www.jeffnarucki.comnoreply@blogger.com